February 19th, 2018, 12:36 pm

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EmmaVieceli, February 19th, 2018, 12:36 pm     Reply

End of the chapter! And an end of more than that...
Where do you go from here, Ian?

I spent some time today reading back over old pages and reliving your amazing comments- Malin and I appreciate the engagement you guys show our story so much. You give BREAKS life. Thank you ^_^

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Chess Pargeter, February 19th, 2018, 12:54 pm     Reply

Damn that was rough. But I admire Milly. She knows it's really over and she takes control of it by doing the dumping after being cheated on for so long. And I like that she doesn't let Ian off the hook or tell him that what he did to her was okay. Just cause it was a guy def doesn't make him less of an asshole. Good for you, girl. Now Ian, you go find Cortland and apologize!

'Thene (Guest), February 19th, 2018, 1:19 pm     Reply

Welp. That went well.

In all seriousness, though, Milly handled that admirably. She's been deflecting every time Ian tries to start this conversation, but she's clearly been thinking about it, not running away from it.

Self-Azured (Guest), February 19th, 2018, 1:25 pm     Reply

Oh, boy
Well...that was a bit painful and long over due. I’m glad that despite taking so long to finally tell her Ian didn’t make excuses and held true to his relationship with Cort. Not sure he and Miley will recover as friends after that...firy display (this is what happens when you drag your heels) but maybe once she’s cooled down and he’s groveled a bit. Now here’s hoping he goes to Cort and makes a commitment! Love this!

Cornflakes (Guest), February 19th, 2018, 1:27 pm     Reply

Milly handled that well and like the badass she is. It must have hurt her a lot. It’s okay Milly, I hope you find someone to match your fierceness and that will treat you well.

lazy-lil-king, February 19th, 2018, 1:44 pm     Reply

Easily the best breakup line ever

DanishWolf (Guest), February 19th, 2018, 1:59 pm     Reply

That's the most impressive exit I have seen in a while. All that's missing is a sound bubble on that money going *snap, snap, snap* xD

sstogner1, February 19th, 2018, 2:15 pm     Reply

Good for you Milly...She handled that like a queen. She cared enough for Ian she didn't want to try and ruin Ian and Cort's chance at happiness.
Now Ian, get your ass over to Cort's and beg forgiveness and give lots of hugs and kisses...lots!

portisHeart, February 19th, 2018, 4:49 pm     Reply

wow. that was swift. and absolutely drama-free. not what i would have expected from her... Ian's been dumped in 6 sentences and about 30 seconds. i guess it didn't come as a surprise, she knew sth was up.
well, Ian, your ex has just dumped you, and your crush needs some me time. you just went from double-timing & group outing to sitting alone in a club. cheers, mate. XD

Krondor2000, February 19th, 2018, 5:32 pm     Reply

Wow that girl is on fire! Beautiful exit!

Travelingpooch, February 19th, 2018, 6:50 pm     Reply


Knew it >_>.. sidenote: -hugs milly- it ok gurl :'(

Travelingpooch, February 19th, 2018, 6:51 pm     Reply

@Krondor2000: cue ALICIA KEYS!

Shaleene, February 19th, 2018, 7:08 pm     Reply

She handled that beautifully. Nice job.

Whimsy (Guest), February 19th, 2018, 11:21 pm     Reply

Just noticed, this is the chapter where both of them have "the talk" they needed to have. They severed the ropes that held their relationship back. :o

cherish.york, February 20th, 2018, 1:40 pm     Reply

Yes, yes Milly. *applauds* Now Ian you can fix the rest of the mess you've created.

EmmaVieceli, February 21st, 2018, 4:53 am     Reply

@Chess Pargeter: She played it just right, eh? :)

EmmaVieceli, February 21st, 2018, 4:54 am     Reply

@Self-Azured: Painful but needed, eh? :)

EmmaVieceli, February 21st, 2018, 4:55 am     Reply

@Cornflakes : She's gonna soar in life - you just know it :)

EmmaVieceli, February 21st, 2018, 4:56 am     Reply

@lazy-lil-king: Malin wrote a dream-scene here! So good!

EmmaVieceli, February 21st, 2018, 4:56 am     Reply

@DanishWolf: Totally. This scene was all Malin on the writing and it's just gold!

EmmaVieceli, February 21st, 2018, 4:57 am     Reply

@sstogner1: She's good people, but she won't be walked over :)

EmmaVieceli, February 21st, 2018, 4:57 am     Reply

@portisHeart: Pull the bandaid :D

EmmaVieceli, February 21st, 2018, 4:57 am     Reply

@Krondor2000: *amilah drops mic*

EmmaVieceli, February 21st, 2018, 4:58 am     Reply

@Travelingpooch: We're all with you, Mills! xx

EmmaVieceli, February 21st, 2018, 4:58 am     Reply

@Shaleene: Malin wrote such a beautiful breakup here!

EmmaVieceli, February 21st, 2018, 4:58 am     Reply

@Whimsy: You're so right! Big changes for them both. Now they just need to talk to each other!

EmmaVieceli, February 21st, 2018, 4:59 am     Reply

@cherish.york: Yasssss! Milly is queen! And don't you worry, hon - she's gonna do well ^_^

CarolinaD, February 22nd, 2018, 12:10 pm     Reply

That's it. I love her. So glad she's taking care of herself!

chaos-of-vinnie, February 23rd, 2018, 12:50 pm     Reply

Ooooh and with that a bridge was burned and swept away to the bottom of the ocean.
Sounds like she had faith that he would choose her afterwards which is further saddening :(

Shame it took Ian so long that by the time he finally got around to saying anything she was pretty much done with him anyway. They could of had a friendship or something after :S

Diabolical Madness, February 24th, 2018, 6:43 pm     Reply

@'Thene: I agree with you completely. You put it well

IronDog, March 13th, 2018, 5:54 pm     Reply

She's done so well. I feel sad for her but glad that she's mature about it - more so than him.

Eyna, March 17th, 2018, 6:22 am     Reply

she's a queen. and she deserves to be happy.