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November 13th, 2017, 12:30 pm

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Oh, boy! The spotlight has moved and neither Ian or Cortland seem particularly happy about this...No wonder. This is gonna help the visit go wonderfully, right? Riiight?
*ahem*
Hope you all had wonderful weekends, guys x
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IronDog, November 13th, 2017, 1:15 pm     Reply


Oh dear. Hopefully Cort takes this well.

sstogner1, November 13th, 2017, 1:35 pm     Reply


What will Ian hear that Cort might not want to discuss when they leave? Their dads knew each other. Things can't get much worse...nah...their gonna make friendship bracelets.

Travelingpooch, November 13th, 2017, 1:41 pm     Reply

oooh..
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Auldr, November 13th, 2017, 3:15 pm     Reply


What a beautiful way to build the tension for the big reveal. You give us four pages between Cort's surprise (and presumably working out who Cail is in his world) and Cail coming to the same conclusion about Cort, with Ian prattling on in the foreground thinking his righteous anger is the important conversation here. Reading over those pages makes me wonder if Cail has sussed to the nature of their relationship. He mentions expecting Milly when they first meet and then on this page obliquely points out that only family would come see someone in prison and he looks at Cort with that piercing looking panel three and suddenly gets personal.

EmmaVieceli, November 14th, 2017, 6:28 am     Reply


@IronDog: He's certainly been working on keeping those outbursts in check...

EmmaVieceli, November 14th, 2017, 6:28 am     Reply


@Travelingpooch: awww, nick - perfect!

EmmaVieceli, November 14th, 2017, 6:29 am     Reply


@sstogner1: I want them to make friendship bracelets, for sure! :)

EmmaVieceli, November 14th, 2017, 6:30 am     Reply


@Auldr: Your comments are always a pleasure to read. Insightful as ever :) Cail isn't quite as observant as all that, but he definitely clocked Cortland pretty early on in terms of the small world...

yase (Guest), November 15th, 2017, 11:40 am     Reply


This was an awful time to start reading this, wasn't it? Nicely hooked.

chaos-of-vinnie, November 15th, 2017, 3:03 pm     Reply


Ooooooh his dad recognises him!! That could mean so many things!

cherish.york, November 16th, 2017, 2:50 pm     Reply


Wooooooaaaaah! :O

EmmaVieceli, November 17th, 2017, 5:22 am     Reply


@yase: haha! There is no bad time to join us. We're so glad you did ^_^ Welcome!!

EmmaVieceli, November 17th, 2017, 5:22 am     Reply


@chaos-of-vinnie: Couldn't it just :D

EmmaVieceli, November 17th, 2017, 5:22 am     Reply


@cherish.york: Moment of shock for Cort, again! haha!