July 27th, 2015, 12:30 pm

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EmmaVieceli, July 27th, 2015, 3:49 am     Reply

What's in your head, Cortland? You poor, confused soul. XD

This whole segment of BREAKS is so Shakespearean in its complicated 'person A thinks they're going mad and are having confused imaginings, but person B knows that the imaginings are real. person B doesn't know that person A even has the imaginings and person A doesn't want to let anyone know he does, and person B doesn't want anyone to know that what's causing the imaginings may have...oh what a to do!' XD

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Claudio (Guest), July 27th, 2015, 1:10 pm     Reply

Very Strong!
Oh my, this is making me crazy :P how long till he frigging makes sense of it all!

Shy Reader (Guest), July 27th, 2015, 3:03 pm     Reply

Having trouble with some memories, Cortland? ;)

I can't wait to see his face when he realises that:
1: this is not just a mere illusion.
2: It was Ian!

raephium, July 27th, 2015, 8:13 pm     Reply

It is almost as if she knows something is going on with Ian and what he thinks of Court. HEH.. I can't wait to see how this unfolds.

DragonReader21, July 28th, 2015, 10:08 pm     Reply

i feel like i'm going crazy just reading this! I think when their feelings come to light that it will fell like someone just crapped out a whole bunch of fireworks.XD

if this story didn't have me biting at the bit it does now... keep up the good work! :P

SavvyKittens, July 28th, 2015, 11:59 pm     Reply


chaos-of-vinnie, July 31st, 2015, 2:00 pm     Reply

Ouo awkward flashback! Haha of all the ones for him to remember it had to be that one XD how awkward for Ian!

Vanila H, August 1st, 2015, 2:28 am     Reply

GAH!!! Waiting for the next update is like pulling out all my teeth, I swear! And yet that doesn't hurt nearly as much as seeing these idiot boys fumble around in the dark when it comes to their feelings for each other. UGH! MY KOKORO CAN'T TAKE MUCH MORE OF THIS! (Yet I keep coming back for more...must be the start of my masochistic tendencies...not that they weren't already there in the first place >.>)

EmmaVieceli, August 3rd, 2015, 11:34 am     Reply

@Claudio: His head is a weird place to be right now. Imagine if you thought you were dreaming that sort of stuff up...gah! 0_O

EmmaVieceli, August 3rd, 2015, 11:35 am     Reply

@Xrs: We're certain Cortland has that scene in his head...but he quite possibly is assuming he's imagining it. Which is giving him more to think about than he probably wants! :D

EmmaVieceli, August 3rd, 2015, 11:36 am     Reply

@Shy Reader: haha, poor sod! Should be fun! :D

EmmaVieceli, August 3rd, 2015, 11:36 am     Reply

@raephium: She's definitely more astute than Ian would give her credit for, eh? :)

EmmaVieceli, August 3rd, 2015, 11:37 am     Reply

@DragonReader21: We're sorry to keep you in such suspense, but yes - the best story resolutions come to those who wait ^_^

EmmaVieceli, August 3rd, 2015, 11:37 am     Reply

@chaos-of-vinnie: Poor Cortland's brain. He wonders what's wrong with him to be imagining something like that...

EmmaVieceli, August 3rd, 2015, 11:38 am     Reply

@Vanila H: Awwww!! Not long now! About an hour, actually :D But we're so sorry for the horrific suspense. It's all worth it; honest! :)

CatastropheJones, August 14th, 2015, 8:30 am     Reply

So I take breaks from BREAKS, so there will be a bunch ready for me to read, at a time -- you guys DID NOT DISAPPOINT.

Every single shot of Cortland's lips is killing me. The brief glimpse of him remembering/fantasizing/hallucinating Ian's lips on his... God, I'm fanning myself over here.