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September 22nd, 2014, 12:14 pm

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EmmaVieceli, September 22nd, 2014, 12:18 pm     Reply


Hi all!
Hope you all had a wonderful weekend. Here's page 39 for you. Let us know your thoughts, gang. ^_^

This Friday I'll be flying to Dublin for the D.I.C.E comic event. BREAKS will be there! If you're going along, be sure to come and say hi.

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BurstThrough, September 22nd, 2014, 5:25 pm     Reply


This is just...
Too convinient...
He says place AND time and also that he will be alone!!And doesn't seem to notice the guy that is the only other person on the otherwise empty hall!!!!

Evanescent-Penumbra, September 22nd, 2014, 7:46 pm     Reply


Awesome job. I wonder what's going to happen. I wouldn't care to much what the other user said about it being too convenient. It's not really. You played it out in a way that makes sense and Cortland was way to busy with his phone to notice anyone else. Besides, it's not like the other guy is moving around enough to make a whole bunch of noise. Can't wait for the update!

EmmaVieceli, September 23rd, 2014, 4:41 am     Reply


@BurstThrough: Hello! Haha, you're right. It's pretty convenient for Mike to have that info, but what he's overheard is a pretty natural conversation. He was in the right place at the right time, it seems...and I think the fact that Cortland doesn't notice someone else in the hallway speaks volumes for his attitude. He lives in his own bubble and probably doesn't much care who's around unless it's a crowd that could generate a threat. He probably wouldn't even recognise Mike if he looked. As far as Cortland knows, the only threat in the school is from Spencer. And, even there, we've seen that Cortland seems to consider himself untouchable...
So yep - it's pretty convenient, or maybe just pretty stupid on Cortland's part. But the main thing is for the readers to get the connection that Cortland isn't seeing. Which I'm guessing happened ;)

EmmaVieceli, September 23rd, 2014, 4:44 am     Reply


@Evanescent-Penumbra: Aww, thank you ^_^ I'm glad it does make sense. If I'd been less lazy I'd have drawn more pupils in the corridor, but - honestly - cortland's the sort of person who may be more prickly in a crowd, but when he's alone with one person in a corridor, he probably feels too confident in his own abilities to let himself worry, even if he knew someone was there. Stupid boy, eh? XD

EmmaVieceli, September 23rd, 2014, 4:49 am     Reply


By the way, guys - did anyone recognise the person in Harvey's photo? ^_^

Naz (Guest), September 23rd, 2014, 7:03 am     Reply


I don't think it's 'too convenient' at all, it sounds very natural to me. One of the many things I love from Breaks is that the script flows well and sounds natural!
I'm really liking Cortland, I love how his mood flows from one end of the spectrum to the other within moments!! xD

Ighon, September 23rd, 2014, 9:07 am     Reply


I just started reading today, and this looks great! the characters are very nice and realistic :) Thanks for sharing!

EmmaVieceli, September 23rd, 2014, 11:48 am     Reply


@Ighon: Oh, yay! Thanks, Ighon - and welcome to the BREAKS gang ^_^
We did want to keep everything very real and carefully paced, so we're glad that's coming across. :)

EmmaVieceli, September 23rd, 2014, 11:49 am     Reply


@Naz: Thanks, Naz xx That's so nice to hear!
And oh, man, yes. Cortland is basically a bundle of crazy emotion and you never know when he might just blow. Lots of fun to be around, eh? :D

chaos-of-vinnie, September 25th, 2014, 5:39 pm     Reply


Lol guy needs to learn personal space XD

EmmaVieceli, September 26th, 2014, 5:22 am     Reply


@chaos-of-vinnie: haha, I'm taking comments into account and I think when we compile for the book, I may move poor Mike back a little. I'd wanted to make it clear he was listening, but I suspect I overshot it :D

Azhreik (Guest), October 2nd, 2014, 8:30 pm     Reply


I can't believe Cortland is that naive about his own security. He should always check his surroundings, but no! Agh. There is a fight coming over.

EmmaVieceli, October 3rd, 2014, 8:17 am     Reply


@Azhreik: He's either naive or he feels invulnerable...and both are dangerous ways to be!

JesBelle, March 16th, 2015, 7:48 pm     Reply

Picture Lady
The school nurse?

EmmaVieceli, March 17th, 2015, 4:42 am     Reply


@JesBelle: well spotted. :) I was always surprised more people didn't mention that. Harvey and she are a couple ^_^

Guest, July 29th, 2015, 3:57 am     Reply


is that his dad

EmmaVieceli, July 29th, 2015, 5:30 am     Reply


@Guest: Harvey is Cortland's older brother...we don't know where their parents are just yet, but Harvey's obviously like a Dad to Cort :)

AngryAngel, February 8th, 2016, 2:47 pm     Reply


@EmmaVieceli: I just re-read these pages, and I always thought that the woman in the pages looked oddly like the school nurse, but I never managed to make the connection! Than you for clarifying that Harvey is dating her!

IronDog, October 27th, 2016, 3:10 pm     Reply


Hmm. Seems they know the nurse better than I thought. And this is going to be trouble. I can smell it.